Homework
In class, students started revising their previous stories to add "show, don't tell" to describe emotions and feelings. For homework:
1. If you didn't finish in class, rewrite at least one "telling" emotion from a previous story so that it "shows" the feeling in 2-3 descriptive sentences. Complete this on your "Show, don't tell" handout from class.
2. Think of a time you felt a strong emotion. Write about it in a detailed paragraph, using show don't tell. Tell a little of the story behind the emotion, then SHOW the emotion (what did it look like? sound like?)
Example: It was finally our turn to board the roller coaster. My legs were shaking as I took my seat and pulled the bar over my lap with a click. As the car jerked forward, my heart started racing and my breathing quickened. I turned to my friend and whimpered, "This was a big mistake! How did I let you talk me into this?" I closed my eyes tightly and waited for the plunge I knew was coming.
**Please remember to keep all your writing organized in a binder or folder so that you have access to it during class each week. We will often pull out old stories to work on revising as we learn new writing techniques and skills.